请英语高手帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文.1有些人认为某些数字会带来好运2也有些人认为数字与运气无关3试说明自己的看法Fromtheancienttimestothepresent,therearesomepeoplethinkthatthen

问题描述： 答案：　　简单给你修改了一下： 　　Fromtheancienttimestothepresent,therearepeoplethinkingthatnumbersmayhavemagicpowerandsomespecificnumberswillbringthemgoodluck.ManyChinesebusinessmenlikethenumberof8andtheyholdthatitmeansprosperity.Mostimportantly,itwillmaketheirbusinessgettingbetterandbetter.Morover,somehighschoolstudents,especiallythosewhoareabouttoattendtheuniversityentranceexamination,liketochoosetheseatsnumbered8,18,28,38or58,becausetheyconsideredthenumberswillhelpthempasstheexamorenteruniversitieseasily. 　　Althoughsomepeoplethinkthatgoodnumberswillbringgoodluck,othersholdwhatevertheyareluckyornot,totallyunconcernedwiththegoodnumbersorbadnumbers.Theybelieveinifanyoneisworkinghardorstudyinghard,heshouldbecomealuckyman.Onthecontrary,lazypeoplewhoalwaysstayathomeandhaven'tworked,butheoftenhopeagoodnumberof8willbringgoodlucktothemselves,itjustadream! 　　AsfarasI'mconcerned,Ithinkitisabsurdthatagoodnumbercanhelpuspassexamsormakemoremoney.Soeverybodyshouldworkorstudyhardandshouldn'tmakeafussoveragoodnumber,suchas"8","18"or"28".